I like the face, if pale is what you were going for... Can you do something about the mouth though? The black really stands outy against the skin, and that may be your problem...
Yea I know the face turned out horrible on cam, it has this sickly yellow look, it really does look different in RL, there was a glaze of pink that was over it, and it looks way more healthy, after testing a bunch of photos this was about the best I could do to get it looking so so.
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