The spear head is very nice. I also like the design on the skirt. The best part about this mini has to be teh water though. It looks very cool! The only thing that kills the base is that the grass, sand and water are all in a straight line, so it looks striped. also, try making the scane on the base run at an angle to the model. This is an old diaroma trick that makes it look more like the ground exstends past the base.
I'm not crazy about the pink stripes in her hair and I think her hair over all turned out too strawberry red to be a believable red-head. Also, the highlights on her skirt/top are confusing me. the bright white on the skirt suggests the light is coming from the bottom right, whereas the highlight on her opposit breast suggest it is coming from the top left. Maybe she's a moviestar under many lights? I don't know. :) I agree that her skin is a little reddish. I do really like the green on her spear. :)