I like the shine look on her skin. The highlights look great. Her top looks like it blends too much into her skin, no? Somehow the colors look too close. Or maybe it's just me, or the angle. I THINK I see darklining in there. It's just too thin I guess? Oh, and her nose looks too large somehow.
I think this is a nice paint job but I'm not so clear on what's going on with the headstone and skull. Despite it's being a well painted skull, it seems out of place with the color scheme and poise/attitude of the miniature. What is it about hot chicks and skulls, anyway? :) Maybe the explaination behind the miniature's conversion would help out a bit.
Also, a back shot might help explain why the top of her cloak is green wile the rest is yellow. I'm interested to see what you did with the shield. And the way you've positioned the photo, it looks like her arm ends at her elbow and has had a skull attached to it. ;)