Yopur best bet for comments on CMON is to post in the WIP and Discuss Submissions part of the forum. You can get to it from teh right menu. Not many people comment on minis while rating. The first thing I would do with yours is loose the distracting bcakground. In the articles section is a good tutorial on how to give your mini a blue/white background. The browns could all use another layer of highlights in my opinion as well.