Firtly there is a heavy colour cast on this picture which doesn't help people judge the colour work. You seem to have also drybrushjed quite heavily on the figure. While drybrushing is a well used and time honoured means of painting it doesn't always work on miniatures and this is a case in example. You would have been better off using the layering technique and working the highlights up with a greater smoothness. Your paints appear rather thick so I would suggest watering them down at least 50/50, if not more, to get smooth even coats. Thinning paints will take more coats but will achieve better resuts. You do have a couple of spots of Overpainting but that will disappear with time and practise. Visit the forums and submit Works In Progress (WIPS) you'll find that we don't bite (Too Often) and most of us are more than willing to give advise and help.
I like the idea of a Dark Green Goreshade, a different perspective on the fibgure.
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