Skaven WIP Feedback needed

[RaynOtisick]

Hey everybody, this is my latest little project i\'ve been workin on. started it early last week just haven\'t had time to sit down and work on him just yet. I would really appreciate any feedback on the painted parts thus far and ideas for everything else. This was my first try at NMM and am pleased with it so far. Check him out here:
http://www.coolminiornot.com/?id=29398

Thanks!
Aaron

 

[Chrispy]

Well, the NMM on the blade is nice, as well as the base for the skin. The skin could stand another stage of highlights, though. But my biggest concern is te poison on the weeping blade. Instead of posion, it looks like slime or pasticho pudding. I might go back over it with Scorpion green for a more evil kind of look. Over all, a good start.. now you need to get cracking on the cloak!

 

[freakinacage]

i think it looks great. i would agree with chrispy\'s comment on the poison though. it doesn\'t look poisonous enough (whatever that means)

 

[aon14]

I think NMM is a waste of time...
The poison does look a bit weird....
Clothing is very dark...
Lo-lites on tail are a bit dark...
Don\'t mean to come over too harsh, paintwork is neat enough....
HTH

 

[wightzombie]

the nmm aint too bad

skin needs a additional highlight, maybe a mix of white and the light brown you already used

should look good when the rest is done.