Pimp part deux

[Fireymonkeyboy]

Hi,

A second batch of things to pimp.

Azahir the Mad: http://www.coolminiornot.com/123882

Master of Puppets: http://www.coolminiornot.com/123883

Dave, the Frothers Orc: http://www.coolminiornot.com/123884

Sentinel 2: http://www.coolminiornot.com/123885

Sentinel 1: http://www.coolminiornot.com/123886

C&C happily received. This is older stuff, so please ID any mistakes that I can work on and improve.

Thanks,

FMB

 

[supervike]

Hiya FMB...I left comments on a few and voted on all.

A few bits of criticism...

Some of the colors seem a bit flat, and could use another layer or two of highlights.

If you give the base itself a couple of coats of thin black paint, it will have a more finished look.

now some praise...

Your NMM is really starting to be convincing.

Most of the color schemes are well done, giving a very good overall look.

Keep at it! and keep sharing.

 

[Ogrebane]

You seem to be very strong in some areas (NMM is one) and not so good in others. My main critique is your bases. They look like cork (I know how hard it is to use cork I did a whole army of them)

It needs more contrast and a pile of rock here and there will also help to break it up.

Some of your colors look washed out. A bit more shading and black lining will help that tho. Also some of your blends are a bit sharp.

Overall your work is very good. Did the vote thing.

 

[Fireymonkeyboy]

Originally posted by Ogrebane
My main critique is your bases. They look like cork (I know how hard it is to use cork I did a whole army of them)

It needs more contrast and a pile of rock here and there will also help to break it up.

Could you link a few examples> I\'ve been playing w. cork for a while, but this is a recurring problem.

Thanks,

FMB