Looking for criticism on Marine Captain

[Krillduken]

This is a 9th company captain for my Knights of Longinus chapter. This post is a little late as I\'ve already primed him, but I plan on making other models with this general idea, so any comments or suggestions are helpful, especially on his robe.

p.s. the coliflower looking thing on his shoulder is supposed to be a mushroom cloud

 

[DaN]

Criticism - you\'re rubbish! Tidy your room! Comb your hair!

lol

As for the marine captain - I like the pose, but the photography makes it too hard to discern some of the details.

I don\'t like the lengthening of the backpack exhausts, but that\'s personal preference (Although I\'m not sure the nozzles are pointed at the same angle)

The cloak looks ok, but seems to be lacking the ripples and folds you would find in normal hanging fabric

Post some better photos if you can and we can help you more

 

[Krillduken]

Now that I look at it, I\'m smacking myself in the head. Most of the ripples I put in the robe are covered by detail like the gun at his hip and purity seal on his chest. Have to remember not to do that next time. Is there a tutorial on the web somewhere that covers sculpting robes and capes? Sorry about the poor photography, I\'ll read some articles to figure out how to sharpen up the pics. I probably shouldn\'t be using the flash, an over head light, AND my desk lamp all at the same time without a difuser of some type.

 

[freakinacage]

sculpting tut
that should help