Very well done. I would suggest maybe some washes on the metallics to dirty them up a bit. The ax in particular seems a bit too shiny compared with the torso of the figure.
try not to use inks for washes mate, they are better used heavily diluted to alter tone and smooth areas out with them being translucent.
standard paints are far better for washes.
take your time and don\'t worry if it takes you longer to finish a mini.
try and find an experienced painter to show you how they do things in person, it speeds up the learning process as they can correct you when you make mistakes instantly.