Still improving Bill, definately. Do I see some Romain influence in this mini?
It is very brave of you to show such enlarged pictures; although I believe mini\'s should be bigger on a picture than in reality, you can go too big!!! But that new camera must be fun......do any of the rest of the family get to use it?
on the gun, you could go back with the red and crisp up the edges of the chipping. And on the scroll/book pages, some highlights on the upper edges would IMO help.
Still, it\'s still very hard to believe you\'ve just hit teenage years. Very well done!