Girl with sword

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grefven

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It's interesting, but falls a bit short. The pose doesn't work for me really. I would rather see "standing on stone" or "stretching arm", not both. The hands look out of proportion and feel way too large. Finally, the face and hair need to be re-worked.

Over all, though. It's an interesting piece. I could dig it, but not quite yet.
 
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Yuggoth

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I think the pose is a bit over the top, but I like it. Looks like she is Holding a dramatic speacht to her followers or something like that. But I agree with grefven. The hands are too big and the hair looks like cooked maccaroni. Also, I would like the breasts to be at least 2 Cups smaller, they don`t fit her fit physique at all.

If that was to harsh, here are the things that I`m fond of: Well, everything below her breasts :) The abs are really good, as are her ass, legs and artificial spine. So I guess I would buy the lower half of her :-D
 
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SVAROG

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Hello. thanks for the criticism. Unfortunately this girl I will not correct because it is already in the foundry workshop. But consider remarks for the following works. Her right hand is mechanical. so such large! the left hand really should do less.
 
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