First major green stuff work...I\'d love opinons/suggestions!

[Xtapl]

I just finished my first major green stuff project:

http://www.coolminiornot.com/?id=35878

Any advice for my next work from experienced sculptors?

Thanks in advance!

 

[Xtapl]

45 views and not one opinion?

That\'s either really good (it doesn\'t need any work), or really bad (not worth commenting on)...

 

[Molebrain]

greenstuff

I\'m not expert, certainly not good enough to tell you that your grasp of the concepts are good. Conceptually though, the wings on the left shoulder are huge, and the I at the top of the banner pole looks skewed and out of place.

Other than that, it\'s great. The flowing banner is very nice and the other bits are great additions.

 

[Tuubje]

I like it, but try to work even thinner, the purity seal is a bit thick, and overall it\'s a bit crowded.
But it looks promising

 

[dauber22]

Was just admiring the completed, painted version. Nice work.

However, as I was admiring the dynamic pose, some one looking over my shoulder commented that it looked like he was dancing and it ruined it all for me now.
No fault of yours, mind you. The mini still looks very good. I\'m just stuck with:
\"You put your right leg in, you take your right leg out...\"

 

[Xtapl]

Heh. Dancing. Someone else said it looked like he was cross-country skiing.

Actually, he\'s stumbling. If you look closely, you can see the bullet hole in the sarcophagus. He\'s catching his balance after taking a glancing hit.

 

[DennisMech]

Originally posted by dauber22
Was just admiring the completed, painted version. Nice work.

However, as I was admiring the dynamic pose, some one looking over my shoulder commented that it looked like he was dancing and it ruined it all for me now.
No fault of yours, mind you. The mini still looks very good. I\'m just stuck with:
\"You put your right leg in, you take your right leg out...\"

oh man, I have a dreadnought that\'s in a dynamic walking pose, and my friend suggested it looked like he was dancing too! Mine really does though, my friend and I even went so far as to make a little hat and cane for him. lol