Hi nichhorn,
you tooth care on some details like the teeths of the wolf-cannon, but in other parts you forgot to give contours. For example the barrel of the gunpowder or the uniforms too monocolor. you can make a rich work with lights and more colors, with contrasts more refined between the parts of the same model. This is a good work but for a army to play on a table. I like the cure of some details (i have already says this) like the eyes, the beard and, in the case of the first on the left, the skin of the gunners. All those are signals that you can to a better work and i hope to see some headwork from you very soon. Continue to train, bye from Manuel