here is an eldar guy that ive been working on. i based it from an article in \'how to paint citadel miniatures\' but i changed the colours. all comments welcome.
Yeah you have basically gone from red to orange in one step. You need to have a few stages in between. Also when adding the highlight to the armour edges try running the edge of the brush along the rim of the plate. That way you will get a thinner, more controlled edge.