hey thank you for your comments : )
Honestly I got lucky and able to get his eyes done , usually I need to do it in two to three tries before getting it right
What I did there is I primed it first, then drawf flesh as base coat, then dot the eyes, and carefully dot in the white
from all the eyes painting I found that doing the white bit right is very important and really make the eyes pop out
then a bit of thinned wash on each of the corner, so that the shape of the eye is better defined and looks like the red bit at the corner of our eyes
then used dwarf flesh to cover up the bit that I painted out of the eye, then highlight
the bit with hooded eyes, I think, is to do the inner most bits first, then very slowly, bit by bit, paint the edges (like the inner rim of the helm)