As the name suggests this is my first kroot and I'm new to painting and have never been good at art so don't judge it to harshly please. Allthough do be truthfull and please give reasons for your marks.
Looks like you have a good start going there, but I think you need to tidy it a little. You seem to have grass stuck to the sword and his hand. Also, some of the colours seem to be going over to other areas (yellow onto the red). I can see you have done some highlighting which is good as well. shaz