Great wok on this! It's very weill painted, and I especially like the nails. You need to have more contrast in your NMM. You've got the bright highlights, but you don't have much shadow in it.
At first glance I thought that is said "Gortex". I thought "Wow, and he sheds water too." Very nicely done. Your skin and hair look great. The gold NMM is a bit too yellow to really sell as metal, but otherwise he's great.