Nice mini scoring way lower than it deserves. I think Dr. Bob is right about the sword but I would highlight it up a bit before adding the ink and I would add it as a glaze rather than a wash.
Anyway nice work Shaz keep 'em comin'.
Very sexy mini. Pretty amazing for one afternoon's work. Like you, I usually take weeks to paint a mini. One suggestion: I'd consider washing the metal with watered down black ink, or maybe Smoke if you have it.