Obviously this dwarf woman does not have a beard. No one should fault you for a disagreement they have with the model's creator. Beside, it's just Tolkein dwarf women who wear beards... and what did he know?
I think, however, the face is lacking. It's what kept you from a 9 or 10, in my book. A little more shading or perhaps some red on the cheeks to emphasize her anger.
I thought your nmm was quite good.