Honestly, not bad...I wish I could have been painting this good a year after I started. I would suggest working on shading your metallics, not making the mini so shiny, and possibly reading the article on picture taking so that you can show off your strong points:) Also, take some time to work on your color scheme before you ever primer a mini. Grab a color wheel, and figure out two colors or so that you will use as a theme. This guy looks good, but a bit monotone with all the silver. a great first post, and feel free to message me with any questions.