There's something that makes it look like made of candy and thus getting low score. Maybe it's the pink-pastel blue put togeter wich IMHO makes it look like a pie :D I like it, specially the cheeks but I think you should have used a more neutral blue to avoid that 2 year old's toy-ish look. I don't mean it would look better in a darker mood, just tone it down a bit to neutral colors. Cheers