As NSA says the pic is a little bit grainy and I think it doesn't show the effort put into the piece. You have improved as evidenced by the blends on the dress and cloak,which are better than you previous works. It looks as if the hair has good shade, midtone and highlighted ends. The skintone looks fine and smoothly blended in. Well done Mel.
What I really wanted to do was a tartan, but I'm not that confident of my freehand yet. Maybe next time. Anyone have a good method for painting Reaper falcons?
The photo is pretty grainy. Personally, I would have gone with a richer green to match the red, it'd look a little "Christmas-y" but I think it'd work.