Base is a little messy and does not seem to have a proper paint coverage, but colour selection is beautiful (warm colours).
It seems that the shadows were spread all over with the same tone, you may want to try and select specific areas on were you want to build up more or less shadow. I mean, more and deeper shadows under the arms, and on the lower part of the miniature. Less shadows or not so dark on the top areas... etc..
This one is from the LT series, which came unprimed, so I think you went on the thick side when priming the miniature since some of the detail is been lost in the process.
Keep working since Mithril are rather tiny and sometimes are difficult to paint compared to other much more popular brands.