Great pose, very dynamic. The colour is a bit flat though and it could use some shading or highlighting, and also some battle damage wouldn't go amiss. The base could use some extra work, try to differentiate the colours a bit. eg grey for the rocks and brown for the sand. Overall a good effort, keep it up!
what I think: It's not done, yet. get it finished and upload it again. this is not an insult, is just want to give you some hints for the future ...
there are almost no details, try to freehand some symbols of the blood angels. also, make it a bit more battle-worn: some scratches, some rust, a bit oil.
and at least give some accents or main points to the edges, so the armour plates don't appear that flat and unreal.
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