I love the helmet and the way u painted the shoulderpads. Actually im also painting an Grey Knight Apothecary at the Moment and i had no idea how i should paint the Narthecium. Now I got some inspiration =)
Hey kiddies, don't be the guy that rates someone's work a one because they gave you legitimate feedback. It makes you look like a super-immature jerk. No one is impressed by it.
If you can't stand people giving feedback then do not post your pictures to a public forum.
I dislike the "white" parts. They are too bright for the overall tone of the model. They are however the part of the model that you put the most work into as the rest is rather bland. It stands out but perhaps not in a good way... LoL