Cool. All I would've done different, other than the color scheme, would be to give the soon to be fragged officer a bag of peanuts for his trip through the unfriendly skies... hehe. Really love the priceless OH **** look on his face.
Areas to improve on - would've rated higher had the metal and crimson been given some shade / highlight, and the scratches seem unlike combat scarring, but all in all, well done.