Nice smooth work on the green and the cloak. I think the cloak could benefit from a little more highlighting (or deeper shadows) as it's looking a little flat - as such a large area it needs a little more work). Eyes - I like to fill in white, paint a black rim and then the pupil, then clean up the raccoon eyes with white around the edges leaving the thin black line - I do this before painting any flesh. the black rim would help with the stare - on this model I'd suggest very carefully going back and adding a black or dark brown line under the eye as it looks like you've painted some of the eyelid. Metals - looking a little bit flat, so either more ink or less light in the photo :) . I like the long grass on the base, but the green flock less so - his green metal base is still visible through it so it spoils the look rather. Needs another layer of flock. As you said on the forums, it might be better rating with a smaller pic - but that's just because the flaws will be less obvious and then no-one can fill half a page with helpful (I hope!) comments :) . I do really like the hair and skin though, they look great. Summary - overall nice, bit more shading on cloak and metals and more care on the base. Maybe I could've just said that and saved us both some time :D .
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