Attempt at making glowing eyes.
(So if a 5 is tabletop quality, and I'm fairly confident this is above tabletop quality, then I'm curious why it's only a 4.X? Please let me know what I can do to improve.)
The eyes alone are nicely done, but it seems like that was the only thing you focussed on. what it lacks is clarity. the paint does not move smoothly from one hue or color to the next. The main problem is the paint takes away from this model's notoriously sharp detail. I would not dwell on it though. we all have to start somewhere, and with practice or maybe some pointers from your local G.W. store manager, you will improve.