Hey dude, while I can tell you've put a lot of effort into this, you're never gonna get any decent feedback or points posting an unpainted mini in the gallery section. I'm amazed it's even made it over 4, they can be a cruel bunch here. Post a thread in the forums and you will get an honest and decent critique at any stage you want. Then when it comes to posting the finished mini you can at least expect a score more appropriate to the mini. Cheer. Mick