I really do like this one!
Especially the idea with the autumm leaves flying around them. Though I do agree with paxmojo, that smaller wires would have been a better choice. Still don't understand, why You didn't make the first back compared to the winning model...! :/
8.5 - This is a very cool idea, and you have made it look good. The autumn leaves are a nice contrast to the dark green cloak. I also like the different shades you've used for the leaves. One suggestion: next time, use smaller wires loosely braided together (instead of one large wire). I think that would create even more of a "whirlwind" effect. Thanks for posting your work.