This is the miniature I named my website after (chaplainsfist.bravehost.com). I may be adding script to his seals, but I have not decided. Comments are not only welcome, they are requested.
Hard to judge due to the pics. A diffusion box and more light sources are a good idea.
The white and golden parts look rather flat. I would give the skull a color differing from that of the shoulder pad and stuff. Scrolls look nice but would look even nicer with some weathering. Keep going.