I really like the cloak... comes out very well - also the red armour on the feet - pretty well done - overall there are a lot of parts which really could get awesome (the red on the kneepad is very good - on the rifle i don't get it that way)... I guess if you try to put your concentration on every detail the same your miniatures will come out even better (don't worry i got that same problem^^)... Keep 'em coming! Try to mix some untypical colours in your shadows (like blue, purple, tourquise) to bring in more contrast and attention on the eye... Keep on happy painting! Regards jar