this mini took me 5 minutes! i painted the base colors then i took a smoke bomb and lit the smoke bomb to the mini. the color in the smoke stuck!?!?!?! it only works on metal minis though:(
Ok. I am going to be honest. It looks like you rubbed the paint off of the miniature as you worked with it. the base is just sloppy. Take pride in your work. Clean it up some. then repost. Your score will be better.
Very interesting technique to say the least. It almost worked out from the looks of it lol. I am guessing this is not the first time you have tried this.