I'll start with the negatives and end the positives. For starters, your composite pic is too busy. How about just a pic of the mini's front and back. Next, it's very difficult to pick up on the NMM with such a dark pic. I can't really get an idea of what you did. Pehaps a wash on the hair will bring out some detail. Positives: The shield looks really great. From what I can see the flesh is well done also. The base looks pretty good too. Chain mail is well defined also.