converted these black templar assault men with pieces from the grey knights , and a head from the chaos marauder sprues...still learning how to both paint and shoot...any comments and criticism is welcome....
You're off to a great start here. I think that you would really benefit from joining the forums and getting some detailed feedback -- a few simple touches, such as highlighting and shading, would really make these models pop.
For the photo work on diffusing the light a bit more. There are some excellent tips in the articles section for this.