I gave you a 7 for pure effort, I think you produced a very clean model, added a personal touch to it with a very well done plasmabag. In general i think you did a very good job!
Water down your inks alot before painting, your inking is very heavy with little final detailing after you wash.
(Try "edging" your corners with a lighter shade on the whole model as a final highlight technique, then following up with a super waterd down base color to blend it all in and some final drybrushing to "fluff" some of the lifted areas.
P.S: Dark to light, 3 shades or more.... :-)
Good job!
Your guardsmen are good work indeed! I really like the green you used, as it is very rich and deep. A lot of details, and the blood bag is greatly done. But I find them a bit too glossy for my liking and the black clothes don't seem to have any kind of highlights on them. Maybe it's the picture.
Hope that can help you.