Looks good.
maybe a better pic (lighter) and less grainy would help.Multiple pics would also be god.If you dont have Photoshop for making montages download the GIMP (google it)
As for the model it looks a good'un Looks like you have good control of greenstuff.I would move jis head alittle to the left(as i look at it) to make it go with the direction of the body a bit more.Very nice weapon and cloak as well.Keep it up and get it painted