the head looks best. like the grey temples; gives charakter to a mini.
the blade is what I'm least fond of.
the cape might have been in need of a little more shades.
the lightgrey, dirty white and yellowish orange clash a little, but that is probably matter of taste.
This looks like a question of style to me. Some figs are painted to a high level of blending and smoothness. Others (like here) go for what I call the "watercolor" look. The paint job looks like a watercolor painting, not real fabric/metal and often the edges are lined with black like a drawing. When this is done consistently (as here) the result is a beautiful piece of artwork.