Einion, thanks for the comments, I'll pass them on to my wife. You are right about the photo, I really need to retake it and clean it up a bit. As for the weapons, the main ridge is sort of my fault since I dropped it and as fragile as they are I ended up having to super glue it.
The photos aren't doing this any favours (the compression is too high apart from anything) but it looks like the current score, high 6, is fair from what I can see and it's great for a fifth go. The weapons are a little wobbly so need to keep an eye on that in future when cleaning up the casting. As far as the paint goes, a little more definition in a few areas - particularly dark lines underneath edges - and a touch more contrast overall would be good.